Joe’s Post #94
That’s the idea the Silk put forward and I’d love to talk more about IT.
I have no idea what it is. If I did, I would be published, sitting on a beach somewhere and having elven princesses fan me with palm fronds. Silk thinks it may be a universal common ‘it’ that addicts readers and audiences. I’m not so sure. I think it may be different for everyone.
The reason this fascinates me is I’m working on a novel and I wonder, what would make it addictive? Unlike my other 5/5/5ers, I haven’t seen 12 Years A Slave. With my time so limited, I just don’t have time for something so horrific, so utterly wrong. I want my hobbits and dwarves to defeat dragons, I want the guy to get the girl, the serial killer to get justice, the world to be right and just in the end.
So what am I addicted to?
Game of Thrones for sure. But wait. That’s a pretty bleak drama isn’t it? Lots of death and nakedness and sinister yet likable eunuchs. So that’s as good an example to look at as any.
Why do I love it so?
And here’s the thing. It’s more than one thing. Oh sure, seeing Daenerys naked is a plus, but I’m moved by the tragedy, I’m inspired by the struggle of characters to overcome overwhelming odds and I’m stuck by the vast scale of the storytelling. But that’s the big picture. Let’s call it storytelling.
You’ve heard it all before. Make good characters, then put them through hell, emotionally, physically, or spiritually, (or all of them)! Make us care about the characters. Make us laugh with them and cry with them. Make us want the heroes to succeed and the villains to fail. Make them human and not just cardboard cut outs.
So what else do they do right on good old GOT? They always leave us wanting more. Each scene. Each act. Each episode. And that’s what I like to call technical writing. It’s the hooks into the scene, the stakes, the details, and the hook out, that Stephen King trick of making you give up sleep so you can read a bit more. Just a bit.
Good storytelling is vital (and has so many more things than just characters, but bear with me). Technical writing can keep us hooked. Combine the two and you have us addicted. IMHO.
But, in the end, what works for one person, doesn’t work for another. Game of Thrones is, perhaps, the best written drama on TV, yet I know the moment they toss the little boy from the tower, they’ll lose a lot of people. Ditto the fact it’s fantasy. Or that there’s nudity. Or that there’s homosexuality. Or that one of the main characters is, in fact, a dwarf.
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Pages Written on New Novel: 0
Outline % Completed: 100% done. Boy, I tell ya, it helps to do an outline. Soooo much got sorted out ahead of time. And it got the thumbs up from a multiple Edgar Nominee.
Blogs Written This Week: Lots and lots.
Queries Out this Week: 0 (only so much time) Just no time. Blogs. Moving. Outline.
Rejections for the Last Week: 0 (has to be bad news. I may need to move the 5 out there to 5 rejections)
Queries Still Out There: 5
Hope Meter: 70/100. so, yeah, doing good.